Draft Evaluation

 With the response that we have gotten the viewers had found the dialogue of the characters to be good and engaging as well as being able to get the message across well. This is good as it means that there will not have to be any changes in the script meaning that their will not have to be any new recordings made to compensate script changes. This will allow us to focus more on the other aspects of the media product that need be improved in order to improve it and allow for the media product to be as well as it can be.

The areas that need to be improved are the quality of the audio and the large amounts background noise within the recordings of them as well as the media product being considered to be too long and lacking in some areas. With the issue of the quality of the audio recordings it will be difficult to resolve as there is not a large amount of time before the project will be due in and the area that is used for recording is not nesscacarily the best to do so meaning it is difficult in trying to find a good quality of sound. The issue with the length of the media can also not be resolved as there is a set time that is required for the media product and it is only just fitting within the time gap. However with the issue of some areas being found lacking additional audio can be added in order to make these areas sound better such as music that compliments the message of the piece as well as background noises in order to add to the aspect of the piece. 

Overall some areas of the production were liked but there are some aspects of the media product that can be improved upon in order to make the overall piece better and more engaging for the audience to listen to whilst still being engaging for the family audience. unfortunately not all of the aspects that were not liked by the feedback group could be improved upon due to the fact that there are certain limits with the software that we have as well as their being certain limits that are in place.